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Blank!  Blank!  Blank!  I hate it!!!!  We had a quiz and a in-class essay assignment today.  The task is writing a descriptive essay, and teacher gave several topics.   The first one is write a description of a person.  Concentrate on one specific feature or quality you associate with this person; the second one is writing an essay describing your earliest memories of a family member or close family friend.  Before the writing, decide on the dominant impression you want to convey;  the third one is write a subjective description of a place you visited that changed how you look at the world.  In your thesis statement and your conclusion, explain how the experience affected you.   At firs,  I chose the third one, for it’s not so simple and I was under the impression that I had such experience.  I racked my brain out to get some specific idea about that topic, but after half an hour passed,  I got nothing.   I couldn’t waste my time anymore, so I chose the second one.  I wrote about my father, but after I wrote two paragraph,  it seemed that I was writing a descriptive essay.   Meanwhile, the teacher said time was almost up.  OMG,  I tired my best to finish it.  I have no time to care about words choosing, grammar, and sentences.   Without doubt,  I handed it in.   I really wanted to cry at that time because I handed in the worst essay I had ever written.    All the vocabularies used in the essay is pupil’s level,  sentences are simple sentences,  thesis statement is not clear and details are not specific.  I had never wrote such a bad essay,  I used to have something I satisfied in my essays.  I thought my ideas are good. I alway could  get good ideas before, but I got nothing this time.  Blank!  Blank! Blank!  I used to put my stories in the essay.   However, this time I failed.  I hated myself.  Why I’m so lazy and stupid?  I couldn’t waste time anymore, or I will die.